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剑桥雅思考官写作9分范文:传统的守护
发布人:管理员   发布时间:2017-7-18
  本范文来自剑桥雅思,是近乎9分的存在。江湖有言:熟读剑雅一百遍,不会作文也会吟。你是拿来无脑背诵也好,一篇一篇品评研究也好,照着葫芦画瓢也好,都是对你的写作大有裨益的。个人建议:重点学习考官是如何入题,如何立论,如何论述,如何结尾,还有如何承接过渡的。总之就是学习这些范文的骨架是如何搭建的。
  When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.传统技艺与生活方式在消失,保护它们是有意义?
  To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
  考官参考范文:
  Overall, I disagree with the opinion expressed. I would like to begin by pointing out that ‘traditional skills and ways of life’ are not automatically of one country, but of a culture or community.
  In many ways, the history of civilization is the history of technology: from the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheel to the development of the Internet, we have been moving on from previous ways of doing things. Some technologies, such as weapons of mass destruction, are of negative impact. Others, such as medical advances, positively help people to live better or longer, and so very much help traditional ways of life. Surely, few people would seek to preserve such traditions as living in caves!
  Interestingly, technology can positively contribute to the keeping alive of traditional skills and ways of life. For example, the populations of some islands are too small to have normal schools. Rather than breaking up families by sending children to the mainland, education authorities have been able to use the Internet to deliver schooling online. In addition, the Internet, and modern refrigeration techniques, are being used to keep alive the traditional skills of producing salmon; it can now be ordered from, and delivered to, anywhere in the world.
  In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think is by no means ‘pointless’, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology. We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life.
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